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The narrative and ideas clearly trace a core, while never exposing it. Like water flowing around a stone, curving around its surface. The pacing feels like a physical force, sometimes gliding smooth, sometimes turning so violently, it gives your attention a whiplash.
— Dec 05, 2025 09:21AM
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+ full of peculiar ideas, e.g. blend between animate/inanimate, people turning into objects and objects having intent. a dentist seeing the soul in the teeth. soldiers feeling like stone masons while killing Hereros (fucked up thought).
- too many characters with little to differentiate them, and at points it drags on.
clearly an original thinker, looking forward to his later and better crafted books
— Aug 11, 2026 09:49AM
- too many characters with little to differentiate them, and at points it drags on.
clearly an original thinker, looking forward to his later and better crafted books