Status Update

Evie is 34% done

I like the concept of the magic but it feels like it’s lacking something?
Maybe I’m just not vibing the FMC? Idk.

— Dec 07, 2025 01:15AM

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Evie’s Previous Updates

Evie is 50% done

This would be at LEAST 100 pages shorter if we took out all the unnecessary repetition of past paragraphs and dialogue.
Train of thought of the FMC is one thing, but can the author just trust the reader to remember details for themselves? It’s heavy handed and boring.

— Dec 09, 2025 01:51PM

Evie is 40% done

— Dec 09, 2025 01:46AM

Evie is 31% done

— Dec 07, 2025 12:17AM

Evie is 12% done

Oop!

— Dec 05, 2025 05:30PM

Evie is 6% done

— Dec 04, 2025 02:49PM