Elizabeth’s Reviews > Alliance > Status Update

Well, that's awkward!

Super disrespectful to kiss a lover in front of your fiancé. But, the attraction to the commander makes sense now because this is a polycule.

Now he's attracted to the commander? Seriously, author! If you are writing a romance, concentrate on the attraction being between the main characters.

Do not include sex with other people outside the main romance!

It's so disturbing! And unnecessary.