Parsnip’s Reviews > The Sleepless > Status Update

So much of this is not believable:
- the sleepless being considered as freaks
- the dialogues feel fake af
- the synthetic coffee ? 😐

There's literally a paragraph of explanation after every single sentence, I can't. LESS IS MORE, this is not an encyclopedia 😭

I'm so tired of the heavy paragraphs just explaining in too much details how everything in this world works. It's great that Manibo thought his thing through but if the only way to share that is by imposing long explanations that interrupt the plot every chapter then it's not worth it. It's supposed to be thrillery, I shouldn't be that bored

Kinda riddled with useless details/descriptions :/