✧ jay ✧’s Reviews > Holiday Ever After > Status Update
✧ jay ✧
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DNF'ing.
This reads like it was written in a bad trip induced haze. The storyline is bouncing all over the place, the MMC is infuriatingly stubborn and not in the grumpy/sunshine trope way, and the FMC feels flat. I'm having a hard time believing this actually goes anywhere that makes whatever is happening in the first 20% worth slogging through.
— Dec 08, 2025 05:25PM
This reads like it was written in a bad trip induced haze. The storyline is bouncing all over the place, the MMC is infuriatingly stubborn and not in the grumpy/sunshine trope way, and the FMC feels flat. I'm having a hard time believing this actually goes anywhere that makes whatever is happening in the first 20% worth slogging through.
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