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I just read the phrase “core memory” and got flashbacks to the time I saw Inside Out for the first time
— Dec 09, 2025 10:28AM
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If I read the phrase “I lift my chin,” or “I nod,” one more time I’m throwing my kindle. Same goes for the phrase “a (blank) of (blank). Get more creative with the writing, add different sentence structures, and add more of a plot.
— Dec 08, 2025 08:23AM
