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sixteen metaphors - 3.75/5
probably need to read this a few times before i fully grasp this

main character - 3/5
an interesting take on the rejection of identity itself but i was just left feeling confused after reading this especially with the words or rather 'jargon' used in this story. if i HAD to describe it then its like the 'discourse talk' ppl online use
not that this doesnt have ANY good moments, they are just buried deep in the nonsense

our dope future - an idk/5
i truly dont how i should rate this bcs this is written in the format of a reddit post, so you cant really do a lot with it
i will say though that i LOVED this, the excessive and out of place use of slang was so funny esp bcs a white cis het man was saying it
i also went through so many emotions reading it

i ran out of character limit here :(

ahegao - 4.75/5
the third part of this story is so insane and ridiculous that when you first read you're in denial like oh this HAS to be a joke, this cannot be real but the more you read the more you see the conviction with which the MC is saying all these things. its almost as if you're watching a car crash and cant take your eyes away rather only further into this mess
but i wont recommend this story to anyone

the feminist - 4.25/5
so so so interesting, i think he's insufferable but the author does a good job of letting the reader empathise with him
sometimes it did feel like there were sentences which didn't make sense at all or like the author used thesaurus
i truly don't understand what the ending means though