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Leanne
is 58% done
I find it concerning that at 58% the plot has been largely resolved, and yet there's half a book left. Even at 58 I think we've explored all we're going to explore here except for the sex. And that can't be that good to be half the book right? Certain elements of the narration and characters are beginning to become repetitive and frankly annoying. Not sure I'm going to finish this one
— Dec 14, 2025 10:10AM
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Leanne
is 32% done
delightfully silly, this is a really fun read. However, I can see why it doesn't have the best of reviews. There are some leaps in logic that feel a little too convenient for plot, as though the author didn't know how to get the characters to the conclusions needed to continue the mystery. Still, it's done in a way that doesn't ruin the overall magical nature of the story
— Dec 12, 2025 02:17PM
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Dec 14, 2025 11:02AM
Honestly, these are my thoughts about every Alexis Hall book. I don't know why they structure their stories like this.
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Kit wrote: "Honestly, these are my thoughts about every Alexis Hall book. I don't know why they structure their stories like this."Oh, good, it's not just me then. I don't think I'll be reading another book by this author if they're all like this.
