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Ame
is 63% done
So many inconsistencies...Example: Remy claims vampire skin gets warm after feeding (in reference to Josh) but just a few chapters earlier his skin was still a contrasting cool to Sabine after he had just fed on someone in New York.
— Jan 06, 2017 09:59AM
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Ame
is 63% done
Another inconsistency - Narration mentions Sabine and Dalia haven't gotten together as regularly since they were both working, but a few pages later Sabine hasn't worked for weeks/months since returning from NY.
— Jan 06, 2017 10:01AM
Ame
is 18% done
Already confused. One has to assume that there are more than, say, 6 people in Sabine's grade, and therefore, many kids are turning 18 the year the "chosen" is, uh, chosen, so why is Sabine such a whiny git about it like she's one of only a couple people in a narrow playing field?
If she doesn't move in until 21 and lives 18 to 21 however she wants, why bother telling the chosen at 18? Why not birth? Or 21?
— Jan 05, 2017 01:35PM
If she doesn't move in until 21 and lives 18 to 21 however she wants, why bother telling the chosen at 18? Why not birth? Or 21?
