Lyndsey’s Reviews > The Night Guests > Status Update
Lyndsey
is 61% done
This would've been a lot better if the history didn't seem like the author picked random notable names and made up backstory for them. It would have all been much more immersive to make up families entirely than to take what feels like bare minimum research and attach characters at random
Also Nina is infuriatingly wishy washy and childish and almost deliberately stupid
— Dec 16, 2025 02:48PM
Also Nina is infuriatingly wishy washy and childish and almost deliberately stupid
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Lyndsey
is 22% done
The name dropping of local Omaha businesses feels weird and performative. Like the author is trying to nudge and wink the reader, but instead of an interesting easter egg it's coming off as pushy with how many there are. Again I wonder what the families of these people would think since neither is exactly being kindly painted
— Dec 16, 2025 11:57AM
Lyndsey
is 15% done
It's fun to read a story set in the city I live in, even if its in the early 1900's. But Nina is kind of flat and passive even for all her trying to solve her family's problems
— Dec 12, 2025 09:04AM

