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No. Just no.
If an author is going to write gay sex, the author should know something about anal sex. Specifically male anal sex. If the bottom is a Virgin (or not!) and the top's cock is "huge", then spit for lube is NOT enough. It's not sexy to imagine the pain this would cause. It just makes the reader feel sorry for the bottom while thinking the top is uncaring. First sex scene: 0 stars.
— Jan 07, 2017 11:50AM
If an author is going to write gay sex, the author should know something about anal sex. Specifically male anal sex. If the bottom is a Virgin (or not!) and the top's cock is "huge", then spit for lube is NOT enough. It's not sexy to imagine the pain this would cause. It just makes the reader feel sorry for the bottom while thinking the top is uncaring. First sex scene: 0 stars.
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WTF????
Does WATER work in the vagina as lube? If it doesn't work in an area that makes its Own lube, why would anyone think it would work in an area that doesn't?
Water does not = lube in shower sex. Especially anal sex. 2nd Sex Scene: 0 stars.
Instalove, lack of character development, and misinformed approach to this genre have me close to DNFing this one.
— Jan 07, 2017 11:54AM
Does WATER work in the vagina as lube? If it doesn't work in an area that makes its Own lube, why would anyone think it would work in an area that doesn't?
Water does not = lube in shower sex. Especially anal sex. 2nd Sex Scene: 0 stars.
Instalove, lack of character development, and misinformed approach to this genre have me close to DNFing this one.
