Mimccub’s Reviews > The Heaven & Earth Grocery Store > Status Update

It’s unbelievable how long some of these paragraphs are, especially since some of them are comprised of sentences that could be considered run-sentences, and because they are connected by commas and conjunctions, it’s becoming tiresome. I am finding myself skipping paragraphs because I want to get to actual dialogue and don’t care about the details or thoughts going through the mind of the character.

I am so mad right now. 🤬