Riley Baum ’s Reviews > I’ll Be Alone For Christmas > Status Update

This books pissing me off a little bit. It’s written like this. “I walked in the door. I took off my coat. I stepped inside. I walked to the couch and sat down.” You know what I mean .. and like… I learned not to write like that in like 2nd grade. I vividly remember having an assignment to write an essay or whatever on how to make a PB&J and the point of the exercise was to not do this.