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A couple inconsistencies:
1. She walks into a room and sees a guy looking into a mirror, here's what he sees in this window mirror, and this is the look on his face. How does she see both?? One would be turned away if she sees the other.
2. The Willow says Nieshka spent all her magic against the tsoglav/Ballo and needs rest for a week before using magic, yet she instantly uses it (w/in 24h) and doesn't seemed phased.
— Dec 18, 2025 10:41PM
1. She walks into a room and sees a guy looking into a mirror, here's what he sees in this window mirror, and this is the look on his face. How does she see both?? One would be turned away if she sees the other.
2. The Willow says Nieshka spent all her magic against the tsoglav/Ballo and needs rest for a week before using magic, yet she instantly uses it (w/in 24h) and doesn't seemed phased.
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126 pages to go, my rating has steadily dropped from three stars to one star throughout the 700-page ebook. I am so tired of reading this, ready to be done.
— Dec 20, 2025 08:57AM
mairiachi
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Ch 24 is inconsistent. First paragraph says she fell asleep on the rug, second paragraph describes her waking up in bed, with Kasia on the rug at the foot of the bed.
— Dec 18, 2025 09:58PM
mairiachi
is on page 443 of 465
this is so confusing, if she can say that word that gives her a new outfit, why does she still walk into parties with mud all over her? If you're going to walk to parties and talk about how dirty you are when you get there...why not just cast that very first spell you ever learned, yk the one that is incredibly easy and makes you instantly clean and fancy??
— Dec 17, 2025 09:59PM
mairiachi
is on page 369 of 465
I'm so sick and tired of a really powerful heroine being on the spot and forgetting everything. Like as soon as she needs to prove herself, she goes to pieces. I cannot stand that it's so annoying.
— Dec 17, 2025 10:37AM
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is on page 369 of 465
There is no way she'd be able to walk after 23 years of not moving at all, they should have brought a stretcher and the author should have thought of muscles atrophying. Though this is fantasy, I just gotta keep suspending that disbelief.
— Dec 17, 2025 01:08AM
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is on page 369 of 465
She mentions there's no wildlife in the wood, no sound or sign of life - but then says they followed deer tracks. So are there animals or not? Unless she means old deer tracks, but those do not last long and it's been over 20 years since polosna (or whatever the town is called) was taken over so it would have to be pretty recent tracks.
— Dec 17, 2025 01:05AM
mairiachi
is on page 290 of 465
That's so funny that preying mantises show up, bc I was picturing the walkers as mantises, so when they were there too, I had to start picturing smth else for the walkers lol
— Dec 17, 2025 01:02AM
mairiachi
is on page 290 of 465
On chapter 14 and I genuinely don't understand the complete stupidity of bringing all three wizard/witch crew into the forest, who's going to say the chants over each other when you get out? You'll all have gone crazy by then.
And secondly, why did they bring kasia? Why did she even need to be there?? She's not a witch, she can't do anything except be re-corrupted (or at very least re-traumatized).
— Dec 17, 2025 12:38AM
And secondly, why did they bring kasia? Why did she even need to be there?? She's not a witch, she can't do anything except be re-corrupted (or at very least re-traumatized).
