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Clara
is 84% done
Noooo like a lot about this is unfortunately OFF imo
Something about the structure, the mc, the other characters…
Something makes this feel unreal & flat & tedious while ALSO being really really enjoyable, fun and gripping
Sooo confusing and unsatisfying
Feels like it would’ve needed another good edit (most arrogant thing to say EVER ik)
— Dec 19, 2025 04:55AM
Something about the structure, the mc, the other characters…
Something makes this feel unreal & flat & tedious while ALSO being really really enjoyable, fun and gripping
Sooo confusing and unsatisfying
Feels like it would’ve needed another good edit (most arrogant thing to say EVER ik)
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Clara
is 51% done
but evidently I’m *bingingg* through this, this book is a pretty good time
— Dec 19, 2025 12:05AM
