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Florence Salmon
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Soooo... does Singer have grey eyes or green eyes..? Carson, girl, fire your editor, they don't know diddly squat about continuity errors...
— Dec 19, 2025 04:10PM
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Florence Salmon
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'They were close against each other. She felt him trembling and her fists were tight enough to crack. 'Oh, God,' he kept saying over and over. It was like her head was broke off from her body and thrown away. And here eyes looked up straight up to the blinding sun while she counted something in her mind. And then this was the way.
This was how it was.'
Carson McCullers. You get me so demented style. I just !!
— Dec 20, 2025 10:34AM
This was how it was.'
Carson McCullers. You get me so demented style. I just !!
Florence Salmon
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Inviting all my neighbours to a christmas party so I can mansplain Marxist theory. 'B-b-but Zack Polanski wants to steal my house-' Cousin Chris, you are tonight's big loser. Go ahead and step into my sloppy vat of french onion soup.
— Dec 20, 2025 06:11AM
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Dec 19, 2025 04:16PM
And, to really nitpick, in the second damn chapter you're yammering about how the 'deaf-mute still drank coffee by himself', but about four paragraphs later yer saying 'the mute sat silently over his glass of beer'? Yer continuity is all over the shop? Get a grip??
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