Charles’s Reviews > The Final Empire > Status Update

I wish i could just carve out all the nonsense and just get the genuinly interesting well crafted story underneath. Because its there.

I wish Vin's characterisation was consistent.

End of Part 2
Fantastic Action Scene, I gotta hand it to him
I no longer Trust [Spoilers] Even A Little Bit.

god the unreflected misogynie. Yay girl as a main character. Except the writer periodically forgets how to writer her in favour of really flat clichés. Vin is introduced as REALLY clever why is she somtimes stupid. SHE WOULD KNOW THIS. Also hate when i can clock a romantic subplot from a mile away. Very excited for that (/sarc) Its! fine! Its fine.

mhm... okay.

Part 1 done and I was feeling good and then the first chapter of Part 2 is maybe the worst so far? idk its not like Actually Bad but its got a really weird tone to it. feels a bit like a filler, both too full of exposition and stretched to thin to cover it well.

VIN IS MY GIRL AND THEY ALL NEED TO LEAVE HER ALONE SHE'S DOING HER BEST. Also <3 The Creature <3 And What A Creature It Is <3 <3

Good Chapter :) very fun :)