C’s Reviews > The Teeth of Dawn > Status Update

Wow, this is really bad. I’m shocked. However, it seems to be getting better. Only time will tell whether that assertion holds.

It’s incredibly cheesy. We’re going through the motions for a conclusion. All the dialogue seems so forced to be deep and reflective. I swear, every single perspective character has had to make some grand statement on the powers of love. Ughhhhhhh.

Already an improvement as far as the first chapter saga is concerned. At least I know to expect a 3 year time skip.