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I am struggling to finish this. At this point… It’s a hate read

In book 1 the Quicksilver tells Saeris that as long as it holds the song she won’t forget what they remember.
But here we are in book 2 chapter 24 the Quicksilver takes a memory — she forgets it — and the scary book reading vamp-monster asks what will she do when the Quicksilver takes all her memories.
Feels like the rules needed to chang for the plot, instead of the plot working within the established rules

Chapter 22 Stargazer:
Another bad version of trying to be like SJM.
Oh, no, dream sex has me smelling like Fisher and look I have bite marks.

So, first Saeris is “reborn” like Feyre and now she’s having her version of mind bridge sex like Rhun and Lidia.

Well… book 1 is named the exact word Feyre uses to describe Amern’s eyes

Chapter 20 Huntsman:
In the midst of saving the brother and finding silver. We’ve gone on a side quest to capture a demon and make anti venom.
No brother saved yet, but let’s stop to describe a dream-cabin and her face getting licked by a dream-fox, before we get a chapter of dream-sex.

Can book 2 have even dumber plot twits than book 1?
Yes. Yes it can. WTF are we on a Scorpio-Spider venom side quest?
I’m so bored with this book and it’s only chapter 17

Ugh. When the narrator says thee but the word is actually the. It’s the worst!
The and thee are two different words with two different meanings. Thee means you!