Sli_N’s Reviews > Bratva Bride > Status Update
Sli_N
is 46% done
The story got interesting and my issues with the writing just disappeared.
I just got to the part where Dimitri makes Miguel's daughter cry by grabbing her neck. This part is tough for me.
— Dec 21, 2025 09:04AM
I just got to the part where Dimitri makes Miguel's daughter cry by grabbing her neck. This part is tough for me.
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Sli_N
is 10% done
I already know that I won't be dnfing even though the story hasn't taken off.
However, the writing is not for me. It's not bad, it's just a teeny bit annoying with the "was" upon "was".
I'm not an expert in writing styles by the way so I can't even describe it. It's like an overuse of the past tense but in the present, if that makes sense. It gets me close to pulling my hair in frustration.
— Dec 21, 2025 03:40AM
However, the writing is not for me. It's not bad, it's just a teeny bit annoying with the "was" upon "was".
I'm not an expert in writing styles by the way so I can't even describe it. It's like an overuse of the past tense but in the present, if that makes sense. It gets me close to pulling my hair in frustration.
Sli_N
is 5% done
I know it's early.... but "father replied" is really pissing me off... lol.
— Dec 21, 2025 02:37AM
