Jericho McKraven’s Reviews > Luca > Status Update

This reminds me of my first drafts, overusing people’s names, sprinkling in phrases like “the man” or “the woman” to try and lessen my use of “he” or “she.” It’s so hard to lean away from those habits when you first start out. 😆

Not sure I’ll make it far with this read - the urge to edit is too strong! 🤭