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Difficult atm because:
- "they walked *beneath* ... children playing in the street with black and white kittens". Are these children really tall? How?
- "her fire crackling and singeing Arren's shirt. He winced, but his shirt was only singed" no shit.
- everyone's OK with Arren's god heart, despite it being y'know, HIPOCRITICAL AF.
- the addition of Arren's pov is chaotic when you already find her narration sketchy.
— Dec 24, 2025 03:20PM
- "they walked *beneath* ... children playing in the street with black and white kittens". Are these children really tall? How?
- "her fire crackling and singeing Arren's shirt. He winced, but his shirt was only singed" no shit.
- everyone's OK with Arren's god heart, despite it being y'know, HIPOCRITICAL AF.
- the addition of Arren's pov is chaotic when you already find her narration sketchy.
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