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Starlight
is 90% done
I wish this was a series that I’ll reread
But I already know it won’t be
Shitty writing ruins it
Wasted potential
We can all thank Cherry for being a dumbass
Predictably, the fmc and the other shadow are linked now
But even more so
These characters are written to be so stupid
— Dec 24, 2025 11:28PM
But I already know it won’t be
Shitty writing ruins it
Wasted potential
We can all thank Cherry for being a dumbass
Predictably, the fmc and the other shadow are linked now
But even more so
These characters are written to be so stupid
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Starlight
is 99% done
Rating this two stars like book one
Mainly bc of predictable plot and the absolutely horrendous writing, lack of editing
So many fucking grammatical errors
Ugh
— Dec 24, 2025 11:31PM
Mainly bc of predictable plot and the absolutely horrendous writing, lack of editing
So many fucking grammatical errors
Ugh
Starlight
is 95% done
Cherry just has the unfortunate position of being the first woman and then the other woman
The one that was never the main character
😬
So I automatically didn’t like her
But tbh she’s not so bad
I think her and the fmc are equally shit most of the time
I hope now the fmc will be a badass though
Bleh
— Dec 24, 2025 11:30PM
The one that was never the main character
😬
So I automatically didn’t like her
But tbh she’s not so bad
I think her and the fmc are equally shit most of the time
I hope now the fmc will be a badass though
Bleh
Starlight
is 33% done
at the very least
some of this has inspired me to write and edit my own stories on the side
although i’m still going to add this next to book one to the cheating tags/shelf
but
vane dodged that well with this candy
cherry whatever the fucks her name
last thing we all need is a jealous vindictive bitch to ruin the fmcs and the boys budding relationship
i feel for her
barely
could really care less 🍒
— Dec 24, 2025 08:28PM
some of this has inspired me to write and edit my own stories on the side
although i’m still going to add this next to book one to the cheating tags/shelf
but
vane dodged that well with this candy
cherry whatever the fucks her name
last thing we all need is a jealous vindictive bitch to ruin the fmcs and the boys budding relationship
i feel for her
barely
could really care less 🍒
