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Cherry just has the unfortunate position of being the first woman and then the other woman

The one that was never the main character
😬

So I automatically didn’t like her
But tbh she’s not so bad

I think her and the fmc are equally shit most of the time

I hope now the fmc will be a badass though
Bleh

I wish this was a series that I’ll reread
But I already know it won’t be
Shitty writing ruins it
Wasted potential

We can all thank Cherry for being a dumbass
Predictably, the fmc and the other shadow are linked now
But even more so
These characters are written to be so stupid

at the very least
some of this has inspired me to write and edit my own stories on the side

although i’m still going to add this next to book one to the cheating tags/shelf

but
vane dodged that well with this candy
cherry whatever the fucks her name
last thing we all need is a jealous vindictive bitch to ruin the fmcs and the boys budding relationship

i feel for her
barely
could really care less 🍒