Mimmy ’s Reviews > Half His Age > Status Update

So far so interesting, so captivating and I hope this streak continues. I love the storyline. Jeanette has a way with painting a picture. She has a way of making the literal world come to life so vividly. One tiny issue comes to mind though. I don’t know if it’s just a copy I have, but some words are jumbled up and it’s so hard sometimes to flow with the story while trying to un-jumble the words.