Alejandra Guerrero’s Reviews > In Loving Resilience: A supernatural romantic suspense interconnected standalone series of cryptid shifters, forbidden attraction and finding love. > Status Update

"Shock flitted through him at the newly developed difficulty to control the criptyd gave him pausefor concern."

WTF? And a lot of sentences like this, missing a clause, or maybe a wrong preposition somewhere. There are so many possibilities to make this sentence make sense, and the author used none of them.