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books 4 and 5 have had noticeably more errors that better editing would have caught. missing commas, clunky words/phrases, stuff that downright doesn't make sense, etc. example :
"like the whole structure was carved from a single piece of wood, turned on the lathe of a god."
-- that's a sick ass line, but loses some of its punch when the structure you're describing is a CUBE.
— Dec 26, 2025 05:17AM
"like the whole structure was carved from a single piece of wood, turned on the lathe of a god."
-- that's a sick ass line, but loses some of its punch when the structure you're describing is a CUBE.
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Trauma does that, I thought. It’s an explosion with your heart at the center. It changes everything all at once.
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“You know I don’t remember the names of corpses, Carl,” Donut said. “Maybe if you pull his hand out of your inventory it will jog your memory.”
jesus donut the guy's already dead, you don't need to murder him again
— Dec 24, 2025 07:14PM
jesus donut the guy's already dead, you don't need to murder him again
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"I'm going to show you what I do now."
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i feel about caterpillars the way Indiana Jones feels about snakes. eugh.
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Dec 26, 2025 07:01AM
I noticed that trend too. Makes me want to pick up the published copies!
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Does this mean you're not doing the audio??? Oh, man, greatest audiobook experience ever. You should really do the audio. It makes the story better.
