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Lucy
is 42% done
read this one out of order This one is ok but it drags on... lots of repetition of message / theme. authors need to think about the message that they want the reader to grasp to help the story move forward and deliver that message once not over and over...when you can skip several pages without losing track of the story, that's a pretty clear message that you have reams of superfluous text
— Jan 10, 2017 11:48AM
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Lucy
is 71% done
Well her story was a bit more unique but she was a bit too desperate. Ending was too deus ex machina for my liking. Goddess was a bit to forth-coming with her gifts-- immortality and his brother freed. I've already read the 4th brother's story, so I'm officially don't the series will have to send back Forged to kpl ( diff series by her) as I ran outta time.
— Jan 23, 2017 05:49PM
