Emily Brummer’s Reviews > House of Earth and Blood > Status Update

where the fuck was Fury’s helicopter suggestion while her half human friend fought off a fucking archangel ???? HUH????

wait so Ruhn is a shadow singer AND a daemati??? wouldn’t that make him more powerful than any of the members of the inner circle ???!!!

okay okay only 75% of the way through the book and now we’re starting to pick up the pace!!!!

i don’t get it, is she getting paid per word for this book? why is it so needlessly long / drawn out?

i thought the word alphahole was like “asshole” but in this fictional universe, until they just used the word asshole and now i’m so cringed out

okay i am finally up to part 3, man is SJM really taking her time with this one

1. are any of these characters supposed to be likable?

2. i am honestly offended by how Bryce is written. like on one hand it’s supposed to be noteworthy that the FMC is “curvy” yet at every chance possible we are reminded that she’s certainly NOT FAT. curvy, but athletic. curvy but dances. curvy but runs. curvy but muscular. i would say this is more frustrating than writing a traditionally thin character

i’m so glad to be reminded every 2 pages that the main character’s hair is indeed silky and her body curvy

i’m sorry is she legally allowed to do that?? it’s only the 5th chapter …..