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Ruxandra Grrr
is 43% done
I might find the writing a bit grating, but I do think the characters, the setting, the historical details about silver mining and all that are quite compelling 😅
— Dec 28, 2025 04:39AM
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Ruxandra Grrr
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I don't want to be a dick and I imagine people read Canas because of the beautiful language. Buuut, I'd say too many similes and the narrators are sometimes stumbling over the words. Many sentences where I'd personally edit 😅 For example:
"Every stitch of her stance bleeding belicosity".
It feels like too much of a mouthful??
— Dec 28, 2025 02:50AM
"Every stitch of her stance bleeding belicosity".
It feels like too much of a mouthful??
