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Joyce
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My biggest issue with fake dating is usually that the reason the characters needs to fake date is usually unrealistic, doesn't make sense, or not necessary. This book is one of those books-- I don't see why they need to fake date at all.
— 8 hours, 38 min ago
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Joyce
is on page 158 of 304
Ugh, he’s gonna buy her the house at the end, isn’t he?
— 6 hours, 36 min ago
Joyce
is on page 36 of 304
Not too bad, very entertaining. Noticing continuity errors (i.e., laptop is closed at start of scene, laptop is closed by MMC, no mention of the laptop being opened between these two lines).
— 9 hours, 25 min ago
