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Joyce
Joyce is on page 227 of 352 of The Odds of You
This book is kinda boring.
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The Odds of You

Joyce
Joyce is on page 223 of 352 of The Lowe Job
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The Lowe Job

Joyce
Joyce is on page 133 of 352 of The Lowe Job
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The Lowe Job

Joyce
Joyce is 50% done with A Deal with the Devil (The Grumpy Devils, #1)
lol how did she make this about her?
Jun 18, 2026 06:15AM Add a comment
A Deal with the Devil (The Grumpy Devils, #1)

Joyce
Joyce is on page 225 of 416 of Conform (Reform, #1)
Ok, someone needs a thesaurus because I'm sooo sick of reading, "hiss, spat, seethed, demanded, growled." The dialogue is sooooooo choppy and people interact like robots. Even SIMS have more fluidity than these characters. Also, how am I halfway and still have no clue why anything is happening?
Jun 02, 2026 07:22AM Add a comment
Conform (Reform, #1)

Joyce
Joyce is on page 179 of 416 of Conform (Reform, #1)
This book is written so poorly. “My body came alive at the graze.”

It’s so choppy. There’s no development. I don’t know why anything’s happening. Nothing makes sense.
Jun 01, 2026 07:20PM Add a comment
Conform (Reform, #1)

Joyce
Joyce is on page 141 of 416 of Conform (Reform, #1)
They have had exactly 3 encounters. “I’d do anything for love.” Are you kidding me?
Jun 01, 2026 02:58PM Add a comment
Conform (Reform, #1)

Joyce
Joyce is on page 119 of 416 of Conform (Reform, #1)
Inconsistent use of conjunctions pisses me off too!! Don’t say “do not” in one sentence but “don’t” in another. They’re trying hard to talk formally but then they slip up and talk normally.
Jun 01, 2026 02:48PM Add a comment
Conform (Reform, #1)

Joyce
Joyce is on page 87 of 416 of Conform (Reform, #1)
I have so many issues with this already. Emmeline asks other girl, "Why are you telling me all of this?" Two lines prior, Emmeline asks girl a question about why things are the way they are. Like honey, you literally asked and she's telling you.

The way the dialogue is is sooo choppy. "Well, things are just hard right now." "Why are things hard?" Riveting.
Jun 01, 2026 11:03AM Add a comment
Conform (Reform, #1)

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