Isabella’s Reviews > Amid Clouds and Bones > Status Update

And another thing…. The first few chapters were genuinely just a countdown until the FC turned 18 so they could start their little sex games. Characters are still boring in case anyone’s wondering I do not have an open heart for this

Time jumps are never specified, so each new chapter you go into it assuming it’s the same time period, and wait until someone says out right how much times has passed. love!

Chapter 2 and the writing is still bad. Things are said before the context is said, making everything confusing. I’m shocked some of this even hit publishing

Only have finished the prologue, and so far the writing is sub par.. I find myself going back to make sense of why something was said, as though I’ve missed context, but it’s just that things are said randomly without any preamble. Just doesn’t make sense.