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Ali
is 29% done
This is on a fast track to 2☆ star rating… the writing is SOOO sloppy! It keeps switching between past and present tense every few sentences and it’s driving me nuts!!!!!!!!!!!! Also she keeps saying certain amounts of time have passed, but it doesn’t feel like it. You can’t write two paragraphs and say it’s been ten minutes!
— Dec 29, 2025 06:41PM
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Ali
is 38% done
They share like three back and forth sentences and then the next line is “I don’t know how long we’ve been talking” ??? either you put some sort of symbol to separate the time, or you spell out the entire convo… u can’t just say it’s been a certain amount of time???
— Dec 29, 2025 08:05PM
