Carrot’s Reviews > Romeo and Juliet > Status Update

"But passion lends them power, time means, to meet,
Tempering extremities with extreme sweet."

Catchy lines
Melodrama
Which leaves a bold impression in our minds
Maybe it's simple as that :)

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The above marks my expression

A remark alas comes to mind;
"Ew."

Basically what I'm seeing is a shallow plot veiled by (very) dramatic declamations XD

"Tut, I have lost myself. I am not here.
This is not Romeo. He’s some other where. "

This is just kinda cool and funny at the same time-

"Alas, that love, so gentle in his view,
Should be so tyrannous and rough in proof!"

Pleasurable prose yet rather surface level, stuffy, and bland thus far... The language really stands out, and is really interesting, though :D