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Lit Kitty
Lit Kitty is on page 50 of 880
Very intriguing start, the writing is immersive and the prose isnt half bad. I like being in the perspective of the kids, Thera & Phyro and what not. The characters seem very likeable, with something promising for the future plot
Dec 29, 2025 09:19PM
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Lit Kitty
Lit Kitty is on page 550 of 880
Luan has a bit of an interesting arc going on right now which did have a little of the necessary build up but im disappointed in the rest of the build up, especially with certain characters and choices.
Mar 07, 2026 12:00AM
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Lit Kitty
Lit Kitty is on page 500 of 880
Ok, so that was an interesting 50 pages. They get blasted by garafins, almost lose and then use kites to blast the garafins. Cool. Was NOT expecting Luan to appear out of nowhere being mentioned barely beforehand. Cool, I guess. But how the FUCK did he get his eyes and tongue gouged out. And Zomis FATHER??
Feb 24, 2026 01:42AM
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Lit Kitty
Lit Kitty is on page 450 of 880
ok, WTF is going on, wdym Thema just gets nerfed out of the blue for disobeying? Because of the weak excuse of needed an opt out? Literally what is happening to all the build up lol. What happened to Zomi?? Literally the part I was looking forward too was nerfed for shitty wars and lazy writing
Feb 22, 2026 06:39PM
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Lit Kitty
Lit Kitty is on page 400 of 880
Things are progressing, plot points ive been looking forward too havent been much. Execution continues to be meh, but it isnt bad
Feb 11, 2026 03:30AM
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Lit Kitty
Lit Kitty is on page 350 of 880
For all that build up towards a potential rebellion it ended fairly abruptly lol. Otherwise im a fan of the set up, it just has yet to be properly tied together
Feb 11, 2026 12:18AM
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Lit Kitty
Lit Kitty is on page 300 of 880
Lots of newly introduced exposition, some that feels natural to others. The story has definitely picked up, lots of talk about politics. Previously there was a bit of a lack of internal dialouge but its gotten a lot better. I can tell the author is more invested in this part of the book.
Feb 01, 2026 10:31PM
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Lit Kitty
Lit Kitty is on page 200 of 880
Not the biggest fan of how quick we were to move on from Zomis quest with Luan. I think that we couldve fit more within the 200 chapters to establish a stronger connection with the two.
Jan 29, 2026 08:46PM
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Lit Kitty
Lit Kitty is on page 150 of 880
So far it has a fairly intriguing political word. There's so many characters it becomes hard to keep track of. But besides that I find the characters interesting enough. Definitely more opportunities to give them stronger characterization though.
Jan 15, 2026 12:58PM
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Lit Kitty
Lit Kitty is on page 100 of 880
The book itself definitely has a slow pace but im already quite fond of the characters. There's an intriguing set of plot being set up so. Cant wait to read more ig lol
Jan 04, 2026 10:48PM
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