Yona’s Reviews > The Sapling Cage > Status Update
Yona
is 14% done
Not clear to why Hex is so nasty—I don’t think this is depicted well. Also strange that the witches are so obsessed with balance and yet so hands off?
— Dec 30, 2025 04:19AM
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Yona
is 20% done
The dialogue isn’t ringing true. None of Laurel’s reactions feel correct, and it’s especially unwelcome for her to be ogling her naked friend while being shy and ashamed of her own body.
— Dec 30, 2025 05:12AM
Yona
is 12% done
Laurel comes off a very young and naive. I also don’t really feel like I know who all the witches are—too baby of them introduced all in one lump
— Dec 29, 2025 06:14PM
Yona
is 3% done
Enjoying the pace of the world-building so far. The protagonist is a little distant but at least active.
— Dec 29, 2025 04:15PM
