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Leah
is 89% done
The further into this book I get the more it loses me. The spice felt pretty out of the blue and rushed and the conflict feels like the MMC inserted himself into her stuff where he didn’t belong and caused a conflict where there literally didn’t need to be one ??
— Dec 30, 2025 07:57AM
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Leah
is 42% done
Ok I really am enjoying this book but the timeline here has some mistakes that a lil bit of extra editing could fix. IE the FMC living with her friend for 1.5 years but she didn’t move in with her until her baby was born and the baby isnt a year old? Or the FMC telling the FMC the babys bday is next week but then he says it’s been 3 weeks since he’s seen FMC and he’s going to see her for the baby’s bday?
— Dec 28, 2025 02:26PM
