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I find a lot of the writing and exposition bad/confusing. For instance, we were introduced to Rhys' brother (?) who apparently is not even a blood brother? This key dynamic was introduced through a throwaway line which, in my opinion, does not do it justice. It would be better if this had been revealed through Liam and Oliver reminding him of his own brotherhood he shares with Bennett, even if not (fully?) by blood..
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