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artemis
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my extremely stubborn ass was like this is so bad but i will finish this, im like 40+ chapters in but its unbearably bad its just two people talk about nothing, sex scene with really bad writing and repeat that for every chapter. thought i could get past the sex scenes but this is like the 6th or 7th one and its just. So. Bad. how do you write books like this without consequences. how.
— Dec 31, 2025 11:12AM
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washington capitals namedrop cjbwifns you couldnt have thought of diff team names like you did for jacksonville? does this mean the florida panthers and tampa bay lightining also exist
— Dec 31, 2025 10:22AM
artemis
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i cannot believe there are like 5 or 6 books of this and theyre all like. far too long for what it is
— Dec 30, 2025 09:03PM
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the ferrymen is supposed to be a fame of rock and roll band....you couldnt have chosen any other name
— Dec 29, 2025 01:31PM
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Dec 31, 2025 11:24AM
also forgot to mention but every time they use bunny as the term, the way its written, it feels like originally the author used bitch/bitches but had it changed so the reader wouldnt hate the men because its genuinely giving just straight up misogynistic and sexist vibes the way they use puck bunny/bunny/bunnies
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