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Abby
is 50% done
Ok, the story started off well, but it’s starting to break down a bit. The banter and verbal sparring is kind of interrupted with the lust thoughts going on. It makes it feel disjointed, like the lust is overused and it disrupts the flow of the plot.
— Jan 02, 2026 08:13PM
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Abby
is 81% done
The FMC accuses the MmC of being the type to go back on his word and kill the other kings after they get rid of the villain. And we are at 81% and have seen zero evidence of this at all in the plot. I fail to see from her point of view at all.
— 18 hours, 15 min ago
Abby
is 70% done
Again, I’m really confused that the FMC is angry with the MMC for doing exactly what she wanted to begin with - and that’s deal with Rishaud. But when he does, she calls it war crimes. Make it make sense!
— 21 hours, 48 min ago
