Katy Gardner’s Reviews > Collateral Damage: A Sapphic Erotic Thriller > Status Update

I’ve read fanfictions written by 13 year old girls that are better than this. Only a dozen pages in and I’ve already spotted ten grammatical errors and the monologue of the FMC is her describing herself as “plain” and “nerdy”. I can already predict the plot from the introduction alone. But alas, I will push through in hopes the story might be redeemable.