Gaby’s Reviews > The Mercenary and the Mortician > Status Update

Im fighting hard not to dnf this book. It went on to tell us a story of Ryan’s childhood in three whole chapters!!! All of it could have been cut.

Was this book even edited?!

Cal is being so childish!! Aaaaghhhh

I have more thoughts…
Characters falling flat mid book ahhh!

This book could have been 100 pages shorter, I haven’t finished it yet and I’m sure of it.

Umm 🧐
So the plot was finally plotting and now not much it’s happening again. Without giving much away it’s hard to believe these characters have a few weeks to get stronger and come up with a plan while the impending doom is impending upon them.
But I guess they have plot armor.

Also it’s 70% of the book and so far Ryan’s abilities have not done anything to further the plot.
Staying positive though

It had a strong start, it’s just falling flat mid book.

Im halfway through this book 📖
…and I’m still waiting for the plot to develop. This is a book about a mercenary whose hobby is to kill child abusers and so far the most interesting part of the plot is the romance between him and his adored mortician. 👀

I fell like I can tell where the story is going 😒 hopefully I’m wrong.

Yup, this book is dark, let’s see what else it has prepared for me if what I’ve read so far it’s only the beginning. 👀🔞