Vicky 🌸’s Reviews > Heat of the Everflame > Status Update

The last few hours have been crazy! I still stand by the fact that the writing style is just too exaggerated that it feels ridiculous and whiplashy.

the audiobook man voice was so bad and cringe i think i almost died godddd nooooo aura loss for Luther.

Plot progression ish but still so much unknown i just wanna know NOW. A whole bunch of fucking in the last 2 chapters like get on with the story pls

I do not like the mum’s character. She is just too much, the emotions and morals and resolve change so fast.

Exploring the different realms and their differences have been so fun! but otherwise mid storyline..

Listened to audiobook between offsite visits today for work! Thrilling and frustrating all in one.

One of the tropes I dislike the most is MISCOMMUNICATION and there was a bunch of it. Constant interruptions when the MC wanted to say something important.

The ongoing power climb is really cool though, I’m so curious about the forgotten. So annoyed at the internal conflict (it’s too much)

I think the MC’s compassion is nice overall, her flexibility and will in using her powers to help is cool.

Also the recurring mention of the forgotten one is ++++ interesting I WANT TO KNOW MORE.

Good story progression and plot so far. New crown as well WAAAAHHTTT

- The events are interesting and I enjoy the storyline of power attainment, revenge, love BUT
- The MC continues to fluctuate between this powerful queen to being reluctant to kill, to being so angry she wants to kill everyone, to confident queen to unsure piece of shit. IT’S HUMAN YES BUT THE FLUCTUATION IS TOO MUCH IN ONE MOMENT
- also Luther’s horny for weird things like MC outbursts is weirding me out

Audiobook hours are back in spotify😂 So back on the grind- good listen, just a bit more progress in the story and the dude is dying but nothing crazy/new.

The MC is fucking with me- so fucking annoying with her doubt and then confidence then I love him, no get away from me I’ll fuck someone else, EVERYONE DONT DIE FOR ME I NEED TO HELP U. I WANT BRUTAL HONESTY AND THE TRUTH *continues to lie*. This had be banging my fucking hands on my steering wheel while driving to work this morning man

Also the hints were not even subtle. So many things known to ME & NOT THE MC?

last update didnt go through cos of bad reception - I said i enjoyed the action and ongoing danger and the new storyline taking place of fleeing/escaping and exploring the other cities (abruptly).

main thing annoying me is the MC going full limp and sad and guilty when she kills someone or someone dies “because of her”. cmon man, this is getting old.

ALSO THE TEASE OF SEXUAL TENSION CMON JUST FUCKKKKKK ALREADY

This shit has been slapping. Some cringe moments from the MC with her self loathing and regret of killing people and etc etc but the YEARNINGGGGG yesss + the betrayal and friendship and action is cool