Michelle’s Reviews > Menace > Status Update

I really love most of jm's work. What I really hate in a book is when the character talks to me. It's like the author doesn't have enough faith in their writing to just let the words let me know how the character feels. Ive always known writing to be being able to take the reader to the place they are writing about. But I am finding it very hard to read this book because of the characters feedback. It's distracting