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Ooo I’m liking this one so much better!! I like how it’s written :)

Honestly this story was the worst I’ve read in this book. Todas las phrases que se suponen que fueran cute were so superficiales y como que no pensaron mucho en escribirlas maybe I’m wrong tho, tal vez lo lea otra vez y me guste but this time I did not happen.

No me convencio nada

“ follow that carriage!
The driver turned to look at him in amazement. The two of them stared at one another for a moment.
“ sir— I have been waiting the whole of my career for someone to say this words to me.”

“Come back to me, Jocelyn, and I promise, this time I’ll tell you the truth.”


AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH

“Hiding for the right reasons is still hiding”


AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH

“ I couldn’t ask too many questions, because anyone who knew me would know that if I was searching for a woman, she could only be you.”


Omg. Honestly I didn’t care about Jocelyn and Luke until now.

“That was why I came looking for you, Jocelyn. Not so I could find out once and for how you felt, but so you could finally understand how I did.
So I could stop hiding myself, and finally see you, the person I loved most in the world, for who you are. Before it was too late.”


AAAAAAAAA

“That is why I came looking for you, Jocelyn. Because I needed to tell you the truth. Not so I could find out once and for how you felt, but so you could finally understand how I did.”



Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

“Was it cowardly to stay silent? Would have been selfish to speak?”


Oh my lordddddd