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Ethan Toledo
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ARCHETYPE: The story of my book seems like it follows the quest archetype. well in this book the main charter is shadow and they are in a quest and there trying to find a way out I have not gone that far in the book but they are looking for something and trying to find it is very hard and lots of work and they already lost a friend
— Jan 12, 2026 10:43AM
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Ethan Toledo
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well the summary of my book is that thunder and shadow are kinda going on a very big adventure and trying to get stuff about other things like where they are and alderpaw feels like feels sympathy and they are going into the woods to try and find other people its kinda like a clan or group of people its just alderpaw shadow and thunder looking for other people but on there way there they find changes
— Jan 05, 2026 10:30AM
Ethan Toledo
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ANTAGONIST: The antagonist in this story is twighkit. The text says, “you smeel like pine needles ” (Erin , 46 #). This is significant because conflicIt challenges the protagonist .
— Dec 15, 2025 10:41AM
Ethan Toledo
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VISUALIZATION: I could picture the owl coming down into the forest were they were and attacking them in my mind while reading. The text says, “An owl screeched Violetkit ducked her heart was pounding what was that ” (Erin pg 42 #). This helped me It made me feel like I as really there with them and hearing the owl call I had a picture in my mind here the owl went down and swooped up all of the people.
— Dec 15, 2025 10:29AM
Ethan Toledo
is on page 27 of 376
CONNECTIONS: This story reminds me of the giver this story is like Jonas is like trying to go out of the fake world just like thunder is trying to stay alive . Thunder is worried about his pack and says, “you need to make sure he has water at all times” (Erin , 27). This matters because Thunder wants to keep his pack alive just like Jonas wants to save Gabe.
— Dec 08, 2025 10:43AM

