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is 50% done
Still don't know the wife's name.
There is so much repetition that I can feel at least a dozen wordss lose their meaning and become noise.
— Jan 18, 2026 03:28PM
There is so much repetition that I can feel at least a dozen wordss lose their meaning and become noise.
Kaitlyn
is 15% done
He misses his wife and kids so, so much, you guys. You can tell because he literally never says their names, describes them, recalls events with them in it...
If I was this dude's wife I would be reading a heck of a lot of resentment/"you're my bangmaid' in this.
— Jan 16, 2026 05:46AM
If I was this dude's wife I would be reading a heck of a lot of resentment/"you're my bangmaid' in this.
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Jan 13, 2026 10:18AM
Having read a couple chapters, it's more like: May butts have mercy on your farts.
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I AM NOT ENJOYING THIS ONE AT ALL.
This doesn't seem like your usual fair.
Dustin wrote: "This doesn't seem like your usual fair."You would be correct! I'm reading along for the 372 Pages podcast. It has been good for getting me out of my comfort zone, thinking about the craft of writing more, and there's a lot of humor to be had. This one, though...this is going to be tough. I'm not 12-year-old-boy enough.
https:// 372pages. com/
