Ash(eaux)’s Reviews > Giovanni’s Room > Status Update

My patron ?? mais pitié au sein même d'une phrase non verbale, choisis entre les deux jsp mon patron ou my boss, c'est vrmnt ridicule like ça me sort VRMNT de ma lecture j'arrive pas du tout à prendre les personnages au sérieux. Il fout tellement de français inutile par paragraphe je switch de langue pour me plaindre carrément c'est trop

the prose is of course very good but some of the writing quirks annoyy me. Two french men talking to each other, the lines are switching between written in English written in french or both at the same time, ig both at the same time would make sense to make the reader understand they're talking french to e/o but this mix and match just makes it seem like they're alternating between languages which makes no sense