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So far this is some of the worst writing I’ve ever read. I feel like I’m reading a fanfic.
It has a lot of potential but the author is all over the place and none of the plot is very well fleshed out. The only really decent parts are the romance and maybe the dragons if they ever actually show up.
I’m going to attempt to finish to give it a fighting chance of redemption but… we’ll see how far I make it.
— Jan 16, 2026 11:56PM
It has a lot of potential but the author is all over the place and none of the plot is very well fleshed out. The only really decent parts are the romance and maybe the dragons if they ever actually show up.
I’m going to attempt to finish to give it a fighting chance of redemption but… we’ll see how far I make it.
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Not very far in but so far, I feel like this story has potential but sounds a little juvenile. We shall see how it goes.
— Jan 12, 2026 08:38PM
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😳 oh man that’s a rough review for the only 12% in. 😅
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